2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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With the economic development,people become more richer.But the number of people living in citie is also raising.There is no doubt that many problems caused by over crowding appear.Some people may not know the problems clearly.Let me list some examples. One problems is the traffic jam.More and more people have bought private cars with the socity development and the population increasing.people buy cars primatelly beacause car is a high speed transport so we can go to our destination more quikly and convieniently.But now,the traffic is so crowded that people shouid wait for several hours on the road if they come into the rush hour.due to the situation,riding bicycle became more popular. Another problem is the shortage of the living house.Because there are more factories,hospitals,shcools.So there are less land to build department.It may result in the crime persentage increasing and the house price growing higher than past. There is no doubt that we faced many problems caused by overcrowding.So,we should take actions to solve these problems immediatly.I think if we want to relieve the traffic jam we can limit the amount of cars buying and encourage citizens take public transport if they don‘t need to go to long distance away from.Also，we can build more higher apartments to allow more people have house to live s0 the house price can low down and people's living condition will be improved. As a result,though we faced the serious problem,but we should have confidence that we can get over it.I think we will have a beautiful tommorow if we all try our best.