2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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With the economic development,people become much richer.But the number of people living in city is also raising.There is no doubt that many problems caused by over crowding appear.Some people may not know the problems clearly.Let me list some examples. One problem is the traffic jam.More and more people have bought private cars with the socity development and the population increasing.People buy cars primarily because car is a high speed transport so we can go to our destination more quikly and conveniently.But now,the traffic is so crowded that people should wait for several hours on the road if they come into the rush hour.due to the situation,riding the bicycle became more popular. Another problem is the shortage of the living house.Because there are many factories,hospitals,schools.So there are limited land for building department.It may result in the crime persentage increasing and the house price growing higher. There is no doubt that we faced many problems caused by overcrowding.So,we should take actions to solve these problems immediately.I think if we want to relieve the traffic jam we can limit the amount of cars buying and encourage citizens take public transport if they don‘t need to go to long distance away from.Also，we can build more higher apartments to allow more people to have house to live so people's living condition will be improved. As a result,though we faced the serious problem,but we should have confidence that we can get over it.I suppose we will have a beautiful tomorow if we all try our best.