题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者能较好的使用一些学术词汇,同时要避免个别拼写错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
With the rapid develpoment of society,computer plays an important role in our life and study,so the relationship between computer and people is so close.However,computer likes a double-edged sword,we should appropriately make use of it. On the one hand,computer provides us more conveniences and brings more advantages.Categories involved by computer are colorful and various,which can helps us open our eyes and elevate oue minds.Taking me for examper,I can use computer to learn some useful things or enjoy games,such as chatting with my friends coming from all around the world,surfing the internet to look at the events and listening my favorite music. on the other hand,an increasing number of people,especially the adolescense,are immersed in computer games or other things. This people gradually weaken their social ability and language competence. They are not good at communicating with others or lack of experience. Moreover,some disadvantage things of computer have a great influence on young people's phychological and physical health. the relationship between computer and people is simple but cumplicated,we should accurately handle with the relationship.The advantages of computer we need to make use of it,while the disadvantages of computer we should try our best to avoid it.