2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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More and more parents help thier children do much work, which should do by theirshves. For example, some parents always help their children wash cholthes and do housework. It leads to their children lazy. They do less things and have much trouble to do this when they face it alone. So,there are some tips to our parents . First,we should konw that our children do more things by themslves they can learn more knowldage . When they face them again, they can do then better. If they do not try them, they will never could do them by themslves. Then,wo should believe them,we give them chance to do. We will find that they can do better beyond our image. When they have some trouble to do some things,we can give their some tips instead of doing them.