小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friends , she is optimistic girl, that keep smile confront with all things.she's smile look like the suning give us happy and friendship.Her smile always can let you never get out of the happy mood, whether it's life or study. She will encourage you when you are sad, when you are happy to share with you... This is my friend