作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
Nowadays,many students always not pay attention to the spelling of learnning English.The fact has become much and much heavy so that the English teachers that have realized the harm of it feel much bad effect. Why it can develop so rapidly?From the action of students,we can darw a clusion that many students think the spelling of English is not important and only has learn the major section.They don't cost much time in it and they perfer to learn more English words. The fact that student don't attention to the spelling of Enlish must be changed quitely.If it can't be changed,more and more students will get into trouble that without better ability of spelling English words.So English teachers should ask its harm to themselves' students,and let they make more excetive of spelling English words.At home,students'parents should look over them.Students should crease attention to the spelling.