2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；全文结构较为严谨。

In recent years,a new type of shopping is rapidly gaining popularity____shopping online,which has become a fashion among peaple in social.People can buy not only goods,but also all kinds of services on shopping sites. This phenomenon has aroused public concern.Some people hold that online shopping is a convenient way of shopping and can save people a lot of money.While others argue that shopping sites is not perfect and it exist some problems,like deceptive advertisements or poor after sale services. Just as any coin has two sides,it is no exception with the issue of shopping online.We should develop a right attitude toward shopping and must be careful not to buy something we don't need only to follow the fashion.