题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
As we all know,in our contemporary society,there is not enough trust between individuals and friends.However,we all know that maintaining trust on person is so important and essential for people in our daily life.And that is a good personality. Whereas,it's a pity for us to hear that there is so much dishonest phenomenon.I'll show you an example.In recent days,there are three children who gave a hand to an old woman sitting on the road with a bad look on her face.But,a horrible thing happened.The old woman said these three children pushed her down and intend them to pay money for her. How people should trust each other when they need a help. From my standpoint,there are several measures to solve this distrust phenomenon.Firstly, our government should give an legal measure.If there are people who make a mistake,they should be punished.Secondly,we should enhance our personal personalities.That is so crucial for us to build a beautiful society!