2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；全文结构较为严谨。

In recent years,a new type of shopping is rapidly gaining popularity____shopping online,which has become a fashion among people in social.People can buy not only goods,but also all kinds of services on shopping sites. This phenomenon have aroused public concern.Some people hold that online shopping is a convenient way of shopping and can save people a lot of money.While others argue that shopping sites is not perfect and it exist some problems,like deceptive advertisements or poor after____ sale services. Just as any coin has two sides,it is no exception with the issue of shopping online.We should develop a right attitude toward shopping and must be careful not to buy something we don't need only to follow the fashion.