小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.she is very nice .she loves every animal and often help some other peoples.every friend like she very much .she has two beautiful eyes and a long hairs,so she looks very cute.she has a Good look body because she has a good habit,she to run erveyday when she after work.