2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

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Small wonder,in judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above bar chart,if we look hard enough,we can observe lucidly that it describes the share of domestic brand cars,Japanese brand cars and American brand cars is approximately 26%,35% and 13% in 2008 and roughly 36%,26% and 14% in 2009 respectively.It is apparent that the share of domestic brand cars,Japanese brand cars and American brand cars has immensely changed over the past few years. When facing the not uncommon phenomenon,perhaps we have no better way to appreciate it than by studying the three influential factors.In the first place,the change is closely related to the improved self-owned technologies embraced in cars and the enhanced qualities of home-made cars.In the second places,the change has much to do with the turning of people's attitude and outlook on home-made cars.In the third place,in the final analysis,it is as the economic further develops and the process of industrialization advances that a lot of the domestic manufacturers of automobile have access to more capital and more technologies. I would not go that far consequently,probably we have no difficulty but can obtain a conclusion that it is with the development of Chinese industry that the change is bound to continue for the forthcoming years.As far as I am concerned,it is a positive change and should be stimulated in that it is beneficial not merely to consumers but also for the development of home-made car industry.