2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较多样地使用词汇，学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

What's surprise. The latest ten years having increasingly people choose go to travel. What reasons it is about the phenomenon and what effects could be given by the phenomenon,there have some opinions. Rencently,it is conspicuous that the environment pollution more and more serious follow develoment of technology and science,people couldn't stand it,so ,when they have spare time,they would go to travel with there familiers. Of course, not only that,traveling can make more friends and attach more customs and habits of area。 And, traveling have some not bad influence on our life,and that not only development the economic of poor area,enhance our quality of life but also to strength the relationship of the world.