2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Shopping on the line is a very feshion shopping .i like shopping on the line,because i can choose everything all the time.there are many types ,cheapest products.you can choose the best one ,then you can pay the cheapest money.then you just wait one or two days ,you can receive your package.it can reduce you time,you can do more things.but the shopping on the line also have many troubles ,for example ,the cheapest product may not have good quality and the package is delayed when the road busy. i think the goverment control shopping on line more tighter.