2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays, the phenomenon that students pursuit for famous brands has become more and more common. The purchase with famous brand has become the first choice when student shopping. More seriously, some students with famous brands may look down upon students without famous brands Many different reasons contribute to this phenomenon. Among them, the comparing midest plays an important role. Besides, companies with famous brands usually invest more money in advertising, which encourage students to buy their products. In my opinions, students should not pursuit for famous brands because it will cost a lot of money that came from their parents’ hard works. Moreover, it’s not a healthy mind that comparing with others. Therefore, students should choose the products with suitable functions instead of famous brands.