2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packaging Nowdays,there is a problem existing that is excessive packaging on goods around our life.For example,the brillant goods on the shelf and the sweet foods in the stores. Here are two main reasons why it is arise on goods.First,many customers are usually interested in a kind of goods which have a cute package and buy it.Second,more and more manufacturers earn huge profit by excessive packaging that can make their productions of demand increased. As far as I'm concerned,it is a waste of execssive packaging on goods.On the one hand,it makes the cost increased to the manufacturers.On the other hand,customers will spend much money than goods' authentic value buy them.In a word,we should reduce the waste of excessive packaging on goods and economic.