2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packaging Nowadays,there is a problem that is excessive packaging on goods around our life.For example,the brilliant goods on the shelf and the sweet foods in the stores. Here are two main reasons why it is arise on goods.First,many customers are usually interested in a kind of goods which have a mutiple package and buy it.Second,more and more manufacturers earn tremendous profit by excessive packaging that can make their quantity demanded increased. As far as I'm concerned,it is a waste of excessive packaging .On the one hand,it makes the cost increased to the manufacturers.On the other hand,customers will spend considerably money than goods' authentic value buy them.In a word,we should reduce the waste of excessive packaging and economic.