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Dear Mary Chen: I know that we will talk about the party held for the New Year's Day,and I really want to take part in.But I'm sorry to say that I must go to Beijing on business for a week,so that I can't talk with you .Can you do me a favor?I want you can tell me the time and the place you finally decide,and what should I bring for the party.Thank you very much. yours Li Ming
