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字数：300 满分：100分
有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂，需要多使用一些学术词汇。
Nowadays,we are as students,are careful with our money in daily life.Our needs are more and more large ,so,the money has not enough,some students do the part-time job to earn money,the others,like to collect all kinds of coupons in order to save money,we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel,we do not buy clothes unless in a sale.However,some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers.but i do not think so . I think earn money is so difficult for us,so we have to save money in our daliy life,such as buy something sale ,or collect some good coupons,this,we can make our life colorful and not waste money to make our lives more and more good. How do you think about this ?
