2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；副词使用偏多。

My views on Online Shopping Nowadays,the bahavior of online shopping is fashionable by the development of Internet.There are many websites in which you can almost buy everything .At the same time you can buy them in real society.For instance, Taobao Web,Dangdang Web,Tianmao and so on. There are many advantages buy things through shopping webs.First,there are more multiple goods and their prices are cheaper than stores.Second,you can get them at home and need not go out.It is not perfect ,however,you know commodities only pictures and the purchasing reports by others before you shopping online,so you can not see authentic. Personally,you can shop online that you learn it.If not,you should better buy necessities in the really stores where you can learn them well.