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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。
Today I go to a book store and buy an English dictionary.When I go home,and find out the dictionary is not quality.Then I go back to the store to find a way to deal with it,but the book store's service is so bad.I want to change it,but the store insist that they won't let it happen,and they don't service me then. During the period I went to the store,I thought that I should keep calm and explain the book's bad quality.And I thought that then we would reach an agreement.But the real vision is not so good as I think.What makes me so upset is that their service is so bad,and they always say that it is my bad to make the dictionary bad.I am so angry about them,how could they do this to me.They don't want to service me any more,and who leave me alone in the store and totally don't want to do anything to fix it.Then I have no choice but go home. As a service occupations,I think they should do the best to their customers,and they should try their best to deal with any problems during the service.As we all know,the customers are the god,so as a service occupations,then I think you will know how to make the god feel happy--to improve service quality,and to smile at their customers all the time.
