2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping Nowadays,the behavior of online shopping is fashionable by the development of Internet.There are many websites in which you can almost buy everything.At the same time you can buy them in real society.For instance, Taobao Web,Dangdang Web,Tianmao and so on. There are many advantages buy things through webs.First,they have more multiple goods and their prices are cheaper than stores.Second,you can get them at home and need not go out.It is not perfect ,however,you know commodities only pictures and the reports by others before you shopping online,so you can not see authentic. Personally,you can shop online that you learn it.If not,you had better buy necessities in the really stores where you can learn them well.