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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1956
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
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若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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Student's mental health is becoming more and more important presantly.Becase it has a heavy effect on students'action in daily life,and its good or bad will lead students to do something that both good and bad.So school should pay more attention to it. How to improve student's mental health in the school?Becase students spend much time in school,so the school has played an important part in improve student's mental health.School should hold a meeting about improve student's mental health and set a leeson that educate student to realize it. Only few students can realize that mental health's harm and importantment,so students search some books about it for reading.If your mental health become bad,you will not get some beautiful thing such as succeed and happy.So student should put their heart into improve mental health,and beleive can get succeed

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