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Student's mental health is becoming more and more important presantly.Becase it has a heavy effect on students'action in daily life,and its good or bad will lead students to do something that both good and bad.So school should pay more attention to it. How to improve student's mental health in the school?Becase students spend much time in school,so the school has played an important part in improve student's mental health.School should hold a meeting about improve student's mental health and set a leeson that educate student to realize it. Only few students can realize that mental health's harm and importantment,so students search some books about it for reading.If your mental health become bad,you will not get some beautiful thing such as succeed and happy.So student should put their heart into improve mental health,and beleive can get succeed