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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1953
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达不够多样,要注意单词拼写的检查;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,there are many waste phenomenon in many university.Among them,some university's waste phenomenon have been more and more heavy.It has an effect on students' daily life so that many students have a bad habit that waste resource. Why do we should go away from it?Becase it has much harm such as waste resource ,waste time,waste meony and so on.If waste resource,it will make our country lack of the resource and lead to our country's development become more slowly.Waste time ,it will effect on our study.And if we always go to shopping that we don't need,it will waste our meony. So we should take measure to go away from waste.If you want to do it,you should do some thing as beginning with.In daily life,we shouldn't waste all that don't need buy or don't use,don't cost.We can make a moal that fight with waste phenomenon.

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