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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13030
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误。

用户练习作文:

significance of communication “Why should we communicate?”What a stupid question it ask as "Why should we eat or sleep? "To eat because of hunger,to sleep because of tired.Similarly,for us,communication is spontaneous,ubiquitous and essential. Humans' society all the time in communication.People' reciprocity constitutes various relationship of society.Language,character,even body language,are both the tool of communication. Each one of us are independent individual in the planet,just because of communication that the wonderful world we live in.To obtain the emotion and thought, exchange of information through communication.Our social life need it ,it is our demand of deepen heart.It is interflow of heart to heart ,it is also a bridge ,if you feet on the ground, you just taste the vision of the other side. Communication also play a much impotant role in a wider range of filed.Between countries also need a benign communication ,yet the stability of international order need every state'efforts. A benign international environment' institution with a good and efficient communication. Likewise ,it is also apply to some other aspect of society .Communication can make us efficient a thing well done,and give us a wonderful life.Good at communicating who can hold and promote interrelation ,and better to show ego needs,find other'need,finally,have a better relationship and successful career.

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