题目要求:
Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解:
报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段:开头
第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力
第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压
第四段:结尾
作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;全文结构较为严谨;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段。
The millennium year is a new period, witnessing the birth of a couple new technology, crazy economy blast. as well as a high unemployment rate. while most of our humans seldom enjoy the high standard of our life these new things brings to us.Here are the reasons I conclude after a survey has been done. First, seeking for the better life brings more food crisis. Most poor credit business men takes the risks of people lives to produce the poisoned