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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9532
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
要求
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;请注意分段。

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Nowadays, the phenomenon that students pursuit for famous brands has become more and more common. The purchase with famous brand has become the first choice when student shopping. More seriously, some students with famous brands may look down upon those who with normal brands Many different reasons contribute to this phenomenon. Among them, the comparing minds plays an important role. Besides, companies with famous brands usually invest more money in advertisement, which stimulates students to buy their products. In my opinions, students should not pursuit for famous brands because it will cost a lot of money that came from their parents’ hard works. Moreover, it’s not a healthy mind that comparing with others. Therefore, students should choose the products with suitable functions instead of famous brands.

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