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A debate these days draw our wide attention about whether those people owned strong will are more easy to succeed.There is no doubt that it is true because we can find many successful cases in everyday life.Obviously,the strong will is a critical factor if you want achieve your job. Why do we say that these talents owning strong will can achieve great mission? Some factores are responsible for it. First of all, a person owning strong will is more easily to finish his study without being bothering by surroundings.In order to finish their goal,they may do their best to deal with everything.Secondly, a person owning strng will can create many conditions through thinking about.They don't say giving up even encountering gaint difficulty.In their eye,the difficulities always paused and the ways alwasy more than difficulties.Last but not least, they can actively face all questions and encourge themslef to solve these questions. As for students, if we don't work hard and we don't grow a helpful talent.Though we will meet many difficulties during learning, we don't give up our mission.Keep a strong will to achieve our ideal
