题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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As we all know, trust is very important in our life bewteen people and people. Thus, keeping trust is also a hard job to do. You might ask how to keep trust in good condition.let me tell you some thing about this. On the one hand, some people might think that its very hard to mantain trust.