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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2997
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题目 The Way to Success
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句的使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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A famous remark,said by Abarham Lincoln,“Give me six hours to chop a tree,i will spend the first four sharpening my axe.” ,it tells us that making good preparations is the way of success.For anyone,whether students or workers,there is no doubt that adequte preparations play an important role in achieving success. There are many facts supporting this argument.For instance,an athlete could not become a champion without thorough preparations,he or she should go though a long time′s hard training and get prepared physically and psychologically to win a race.Before taking an interview,the interviewee needs to collect as much information on companies as possible to ensure the success of the interview.A student is unlikely to make good marks,if he does not careful preparations before taking the exam. All mentioned above show that careful preparations are essential for success,we should keep Lincoln′s wisdom in mind,sharpen our axes and be well prepared in everything we do.Only in this way can we have greater chances to reach our goal.

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