英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3104
要求:
题目 My opinion on certificate craze
要求
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
评语:

如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

There are too many peoples crazing to get certificate in recent years.For example ,cpa,cfa cma etc.To get different certificate have varible goal .Many people want to have better job ,others want to get better salary .In my opinon,we must know the goal of get certificate before get it . There are some tips for getting certificate.Firstly ,the certificate would help studing further in major. It is very important .secondly ,it is useful to who get certificate.If you get some professional cerfiticate ,you will have more chance to develope in career. thirdly,you should make sure if the certificate can return the overhead. If you can not ,you will give up .Above all ,we must know the goal of getting certificate,and think about the return of it.

会员评论0个评论)
安西雅
金币:2

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:88.5conginjeno

人气:102发布:2013-05-23

得分:87.5290524772

人气:66发布:2013-12-06

得分:87.5xwh1026

人气:13发布:2017-04-13

得分:86.51070040156

人气:26发布:2015-01-10

得分:86.5宋霞

人气:32发布:2016-06-03