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There are too many peoples crazing to get certificate in recent years.For example ,cpa,cfa cma etc.To get different certificate have varible goal .Many people want to have better job ,others want to get better salary .In my opinon,we must know the goal of get certificate before get it . There are some tips for getting certificate.Firstly ,the certificate would help studing further in major. It is very important .secondly ,it is useful to who get certificate.If you get some professional cerfiticate ,you will have more chance to develope in career. thirdly,you should make sure if the certificate can return the overhead. If you can not ,you will give up .Above all ,we must know the goal of getting certificate,and think about the return of it.