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In recent decades,the information technology has developed rapidly.The e-books have found their way to into our everyday life and gained increasing popularity among the ordinary people. It's no wonder that some people hold the idea that e-books will take place the traditional books sooner and later,because the e-books have various of advantages over the tradition one.To start with,the e-books can be download in the Internet