英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3004
要求:
题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨;作者用词生动多样,请继续努力,请仔细检查单词拼写。

用户练习作文:

Digital Age With the development of technology and artificial intelligence in modern socialty.The digital produces have increasing welcomed.There are variety digital produces,including computers,Phones,vedioes,multimedia and so on,which are widely used in our real life.For instance,in many shools,teachers send and receive students′homework by the computer on line;In many companies,colleagues communicate with each other by sending instant messengers using QQ or holding vedio comferences.That above mentioned indicate that the digital ago has been coming. The digital produces are beneficial for us.It prived more convenient and interesting ways in interpersonal communication,studing and working.But some people complain that over-using the digital produces is unbeneficial for us.On the one hand,it could make us lose face to face comunicating skills,and people become indifferent to each other in real life.On the other hand,some people,especially students,would be immerged in internet games too much,thus impacting their study. From the above-mentioned,we can conclude that digital produces is a double-edges sword for our real life.We should take full advantage of the beneficial spects,and meanwhile avoid over-using it too much.

会员评论0个评论)
chensuying
金币:56

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:87.0就爱女友

人气:72发布:2013-12-14

得分:84.0alerly

人气:40发布:2013-08-31

得分:84.0林洛洛

人气:55发布:2014-12-18

得分:83.5聪聪cc

人气:30发布:2014-05-31

得分:83.0冰棱之痕

人气:50发布:2013-11-05