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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；文中错误的句子较多；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。
Judging from the table, we can see that people's income increases along with their education levels. ，the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates. The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its can ensure a bright future? I don't think so because, on the one hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can gain
