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2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:40浏览次数:9754
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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Recently more and more arguments erected about the relationship between human beings and the nature, how's the human activities affected the environment, and what can we do about that? There is one opinion that we have already done lots of terrible things that produced very negative effect on the environment where we lived in, and it's too late to find some solutions, there's no way to solve this problem. And of course, there's another voice that we still can figure out some effective measures to deal with that. And in my opinion, it's not about the timing, it's all about the actions that we take on this problem, we spent many years to make our environment into chaos, and we also need many years to recover it, not just for us, it's for our future generation. I think no one willing to watch his son, his grandson live in a place without plants and animal species, look up, there's only the grey sky, the whole world full of sense of death. We should do something right now, it does't matter how small it is, what does matter is we have already noticed the only way to save our environment, to save our planet is depend on ourselves.

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