Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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According to the above chart described Median weekly earning in 2011 in America,we know the more your education degree is, the higer your salary will be.For instance, one person of professional degree can earn USD1665 per week,while it can get weekly pay USD451 for less than high school diploma.Obviously,it reveals a truth that knowledge can bring wealth.Meantime it also denys claim that knowledge is unuseful. First of all, for those people owning higher degree can easily learn advanced high-tech,such as computer technology,biology technology etc.While these technique have been widely used by a large number of companies.Usually these great companies can pay higher salar for their employers. Secondly,the employees in growing numbers hope that they can recruit excellent staffs educated more with high salary because nowadays,enterprise competition mainly focus on talent competition.Last but not least,the higher degree can get more job opportunities than those lower degree.Even they lost their job,they can also find a new one rapidly. In a word, we should emphasize education because that is our competitive ability in job market in the future.