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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;文章词汇表达丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

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According to the above chart described Median weekly earning in 2011 in America,we know the more your education degree is, the higer your salary will be.For instance, one person of professional degree can earn USD1665 per week,while it can get weekly pay USD451 for less than high school diploma.Obviously,it reveals a truth that knowledge can bring wealth.Meantime it also denys claim that knowledge is unuseful. First of all, for those people owning higher degree can easily learn advanced high-tech,such as computer technology,biology technology etc.While these technique have been widely used by a large number of companies.Usually these great companies can pay higher salar for their employers. Secondly,the employees in growing numbers hope that they can recruit excellent staffs educated more with high salary because nowadays,enterprise competition mainly focus on talent competition.Last but not least,the higher degree can get more job opportunities than those lower degree.Even they lost their job,they can also find a new one rapidly. In a word, we should emphasize education because that is our competitive ability in job market in the future.

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