Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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from the data,we can see that the highest unemployed rates is 7.6%,people who has less than high school diploma.and the lowest unemployed rates is 2.5%,people who has doctoral degree.for it,we can make a conclusion that the higher school diploma will face lower unemployed rates. the data imply us , right now,our social development is quickly ,which created lots of chances for people who has further learning and wide knowledge .many company need outstanding people work for them,and bring the biggest benecfit for his company.at the some time ,with the high speed development of society ,created many little company,which means,they need more high quantity employed. finally,as the tend of development,people should learn more to satisfy the needing of society,which is also a good way to confine ourselves employed all the time.