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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46260
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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from the data,we can see that the highest unemployed rates is 7.6%,people who has less than high school diploma.and the lowest unemployed rates is 2.5%,people who has doctoral degree.for it,we can make a conclusion that the higher school diploma will face lower unemployed rates. the data imply us , right now,our social development is quickly ,which created lots of chances for people who has further learning and wide knowledge .many company need outstanding people work for them,and bring the biggest benecfit for his company.at the some time ,with the high speed development of society ,created many little company,which means,they need more high quantity employed. finally,as the tend of development,people should learn more to satisfy the needing of society,which is also a good way to confine ourselves employed all the time.

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