2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

With the development of technology,computers are quite popular in our daily life.It can really make our life and work prompt and convenient.Computers seem to be essential to our daily life.Everyday we surf the Internet .chat with our friends listen to music shopping and so on. Each coin has two sides some teenagers are addicted to computer games and online chatting.This always lead to their failure in exams and do harm to their health.If you make most use of computer to help you study and work ,computers can be very useful. In terms of advantages and disadvantages we need to take good command of computers.We should remember computers are just tools which can make our life better ,they are our servants instead of masters.