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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46288
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇。

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in nowadays,the unemployment is obviously more severe than before.does the unemployment rate and the median weekly earnings are in steady connections with one's diploma or degree?just as the chart above from Bureau of Labor Statistics,Current Population Survey shows,in 2011,the higher degree one owns,the higher earnings one will gets,and at the same time,the lower unemployment rate they will face up with. to keep pace with the highly developing society,we all should train ourselves with knowledge and techniques in order to polish and improve our qualities and abilities,which will contribute to dealing with the challenges we may face up with when it's time for us to seek jobs.though we may find that in contemporary society,the undergraduates and graduates from famous or common universities have giant pressure to get ideal jobs,as well,however,an excellent degree or diploma will no doubt bring about more opportunities for you. under the fierce competition all of the world,the government should take the responsibility to increase the whole pupil's knowledge level.to begin with,the scholarship should be increased for universities' student to arouse their passions for high-level education.in addition, the government should supply more salary for education all over the nation,so that the graduates from universities will surely have more possibilities than people who don't accept high-level education,which will encourage more people to study hard to get higher education.last but not least,as students,we should keep polishing ourselves as well.keep in mind the famous saying that,knowledge is the power.only in these ways can we live a better life.

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