Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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in nowadays,the unemployment is obviously more severe than before.does the unemployment rate and the median weekly earnings are in steady connections with one's diploma or degree?just as the chart above from Bureau of Labor Statistics,Current Population Survey shows,in 2011,the higher degree one owns,the higher earnings one will gets,and at the same time,the lower unemployment rate they will face up with. to keep pace with the highly developing society,we all should train ourselves with knowledge and techniques in order to polish and improve our qualities and abilities,which will contribute to dealing with the challenges we may face up with when it's time for us to seek jobs.though we may find that in contemporary society,the undergraduates and graduates from famous or common universities have giant pressure to get ideal jobs,as well,however,an excellent degree or diploma will no doubt bring about more opportunities for you. under the fierce competition all of the world,the government should take the responsibility to increase the whole pupil's knowledge level.to begin with,the scholarship should be increased for universities' student to arouse their passions for high-level education.in addition, the government should supply more salary for education all over the nation,so that the graduates from universities will surely have more possibilities than people who don't accept high-level education,which will encourage more people to study hard to get higher education.last but not least,as students,we should keep polishing ourselves as well.keep in mind the famous saying that,knowledge is the power.only in these ways can we live a better life.