2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Parkaging Exdessive packaging of business is very normal nowdays,for this circumstance that having few different thoughts,so let us to talk about it. There are have many reasons happend it.The first is that we have better purpose for beauty,and pursuit more prefectful composit rather than easily bag as before;second,parkaging is become a develope trend in the future due to economic fastly increasing,so it is necessary for get a good price;the last is need of buisness developing,parkaging is one of most important sides to suit the world. In my opinion,parkaging is necessary but excessive parkaging is not,it is not only waste but also spend much time,it is need too material to pollutate environment.