2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

On Excessive Parkaging Exdessive packaging of business is very normal now days,for this circumstance that having few different thoughts,so let us to talk about it. There have many reasons happened it.The first is that we have better purpose for beauty,and pursuit more prefect composit rather than easily bag as before;second,parkaging is becoming a develope trend in the future due to economic fast increasing,so it is necessary for getting a good price;the last is needed of business developing,parkaging is one of most important sides to suit the world. In my opinion,parkaging is necessary but excessive parkaging is not,it is not only waste but also spend much time,it need too material to polluted environment.