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Peter
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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
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Dear Peter, Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think a good child shoud listen his or her mother, in fact if I tell that you are terrible you may be veay angry and hate me. but listen to me, kid, a boy is like a sky. you must try your best to do everything good. and I think your mother is as differicn as other mothers. Why? oh dear, please believe that your mother is very love you. so you must make her happy. I know the games are interested for your. but there is a saying say that"don't make your parents angry". so shop to play games. It is good for you. Yours, David
