作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词;连词使用偏少。
Ann is one of my best friends. She's got long hair, light skin, and she is not thin and not tall. Her english is very good, she graduaged from a famous school. Now, she is a housewife, every day, she does housework, take her child to school and get him when the shool is over. She likes watching tv very much.