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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
We all realize that there are many dialects around the world.There is a heated discussion about whether dialects are acceptable in public places or not.Some people hold the view that we should speak common language rather than speak different dialects.There are many reasons. One is that if we speak different dialects, the atmosphere will be noisy.In public, we should obey the rule "Be quite and don't bother others".However, if we speak the same language, the society will be harmonious. While others don't think so. They consider that we can speak dialects in public. Because they think dialects are the representatives of different places, and we should show out our cultures and let others know what they are. For me, I think we should speak the same language rather than speak dialects in public.The reasons are listed as follows. On the one hand, every state has its own standard language,and it is viewed as the criterion of the degree of accepting education. Therefore, we should accept it and use it to express our ideas in some formal and important occasions. On the other hand, culture is the symbol of civilization, and language is a part of culture. Logically, language is the symbol of civilization. And nowadays we are promoting a society of civilization, so we should speak general language to show our personality and quality.What is more, although dialects are results of culture, yet they are not viewed by collectivism. We all know that China is a peaceful country and we pay more attention to the unity. And the general language is just a result of unity, so we should make full use of it and establish a completed system. In conclusion, we should speak general language in public,however, we can speak dialects in our personal place,such as homes.In order to establish a perfect language, we should make every effort to speak general language in public;In order to drive modernization, we should speak general language in public; In order to make our society more harmony, we should speak general language in public.
