2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中能较灵活地使用学术词汇，但词汇量积累还要努力；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

In the recent years you can more and more museums providing free admission for the visitors.There is no denying that the behavior can be benefical to the individuals who are interested in the cultural relics.Free admission to museums is aim to make people attach more attention to the history and cultural relics. However,free admission to museums also can leave some problems.In the first place,with the tourists increasing,there are more rubbishes leaving in the museum and personnels must occupy themselves in dealing with them.Furthermore,some constructions or cultural relics may be damaged when the travellers visit the museums. As far as I am concerned,I have no objection for the free admission to museums.But the government are supposed to make some rules about visiting museum and the individuals should have the awareness of protecting the relics.