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作文题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看？给出具体原因。
字数要求:300字以内。
可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；作者能较好的使用一些学术词汇，同时要避免个别拼写错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
With the great advance of the economic development and boom of the ever new techniques, the issue on where is the optional place for people to live has drawn the public attention. Quite a few people hold the opinion that the living in a rural area is better than living around, personally I am surpportive to this view for the fowllowing reasons. First and the foremost, the city can offer the people a lot of thing that people need. For example, when a person feel uncomfortable or ill, the advanced facilities and doctors in the hospital can give the person care in time. And it is hard to imagine what would happen if the person caught a heatdisease in remote country. Additionally, it is hard to deny that people is a social animal. From the side of human's nature, the people is determined to live together with other people from the very beginning of the society. Lacking of other people's communication and allways sitting in ones own house can make one who are used to live in information era crazy. Addimittedly, what I have mentioned above might not be sound or reasonable from other side. Although living in suburb area also provides advantages which living in cities do not have. I still think that the advantage of living in rurual outweigh living in country.
