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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
From the above chart,we can find that the lower education you get,the higher unemployment rate will happen to you.And if you get a very high education,you will earn more money than those who has only got low education. Nowadays,more and more people have not finished their education instead of escaping from school for earn money.they think that if they work hard,spending more time on working,they can get more pays in the future.but they don't know that they can't find a satisficing job with their low education,and they are also easy to lose their job in a recession.For them,they are not only make little money,but also facing a high unemployment rate.So there are also somepeople who get a very high education,they want change their fate throughout hardworking.when they graduate from school,they are more easier find a work with high salary than those who get a low education. As far as I am concerned,study is very important for us,as the saying goes:knowledge is the strength.So I believe that we can change our fate by study hard,and this is also a easiest way to get a good job.why don't we cling to this chance.please believe me,do our best to get a high education.Come on!join me.
