2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Maybe most of us want to be a successful individual in some kind of aspects of our life.However,the way to success is always hard for most of us.we often see those successful people who are famous in some range must be have a harder life before they are famous. Form my standpoint,one of the most personalities to success is persistence.Of course,we all know that persistence is so important for us when we do something.Li Jiacheng,a famous older man,who is the richest in the Asia,he persist to get up at 5:59 every morning,learn English and do exercises.So I think this is the key to his success,his persistence of everyday. As a consequence,I want to convey that persistence is so crucial for us who want to success.Although the way is full of troubles,we must persist!