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拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;句式变化多样;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Being careful with our money does not make us smart consumers Nowadays,with the development of our country' economic ,we have sufficient selection ,for there are a great variety of products for you to choose.As for some people are so careful with their money that they always choose the bargain, i don't think that is the behavior of smart consumer. First,cheapest is the dearest.Some people who just consider the price of products,and only buy things with coupons without considering the qualities of items will always regret for their decision.Second,one genuine article with high price can accompany with you much more longer than a bargain.In addition,comparing with the bad quality of bargains may often make you embarrassed, the comfort of genuine maybe what you really want.Third,many students spend too much time and energy to find out things in a sale ,so that they can not focus their attention on study .As a student,we should put our vigour on study and health growth, instead of taking too much attention on saving money. I do not think we can get too much profit by being excessively mean in every dealings. We are too young to get benefits form the sellers.Maybe when you hug yourself on the bargain,thinking you are a smart consumer, the people who really suffered the losses is yourself.