2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文章能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，但词汇表达丰富度不足；文中使用了不错的从句，但需注意个别错误句子；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

What wide discussion of the way to success.That is too wide to complete discuss it . Therefore,in order to avoid all in a mess I will chioce student as the major of the article. How to get the way to success,what is the success way? That's bewilder our student,so I have some opinions for that. 'Where there is a river,there is a way',not only that, we should clear our target,and to hard work for our target.In the way to success,we will attach large of failure and frustration,but we couldn't be knocked down,becuase that failure and frustration are the bases of success,no failure no success. But we also should have a way which let us more efficiency to learn, and everyone have different method,we couldn't sure what is the most useful, so we need to try and find the way that most fit us.