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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3104
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
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1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
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作者能较熟练地使用多样的词汇表达,但请注意单词拼写的检查;可将文中部分短句合并为长句,注意文中句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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certificate craze, as seeing in our surrounding, reflect a phenomnon a mounting barrage of peolpe are keen on every test of certificate whether it is useful or not. In their oppion, possessin all kinds of certificates is essential for their future life. different people has different idea. some people reckon that cerfiticates can prove what skill they have, simply because more and more coperations' requires for their employers is increasingly enhancing. anothers consider the plenty of certificates can make their resumes is more than attractive and competitive. For my part, we should stand in a mature insight to treat this situation. it is actual important that to have certificate in work. nontheless, what certificates we have does't mean we can master them perfctly. On balance, we need certificates to give us extra bouns point, but too many certificates could get us lost.

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