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certificate craze, as seeing in our surrounding, reflect a phenomnon a mounting barrage of peolpe are keen on every test of certificate whether it is useful or not. In their oppion, possessin all kinds of certificates is essential for their future life. different people has different idea. some people reckon that cerfiticates can prove what skill they have, simply because more and more coperations' requires for their employers is increasingly enhancing. anothers consider the plenty of certificates can make their resumes is more than attractive and competitive. For my part, we should stand in a mature insight to treat this situation. it is actual important that to have certificate in work. nontheless, what certificates we have does't mean we can master them perfctly. On balance, we need certificates to give us extra bouns point, but too many certificates could get us lost.